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Pravite Detective!EnglandxReader part 3: the end

It wasn't hard for (name) to figure out who did it. He was there all along, or so she thought. Backing out
of the bathroom, Arthur noticed the fear in her eyes.

"What is it, love? Do you know who could have done it?" Arthur asked. 'It all makes since now! The way
he acted, the flirty attitude, the tea leaf, and he had just taken off muddy shoes! Oh no! I-it was Arthur!'
(name) screamed in her head as she took off down the hallway with Arthur close behind.

"Wait (name) why are you running?!" Arthur asked confused.

"You killed him!"

"Wh-what?!" Arthur grabbed (name)'s hand and pulled her to him abruptly stopping her.
"What in the
bloody hell makes you think I did it?!"

"Just think about it! I'm stupid! You knew I would come to you for help! You knew that I would trust you
and never think you would do it! Why Arthur?! Why did you kill him?!"

"I didn't! I would never want to hurt you! I-I…I bloody well love you!" Arthur gripped her arms holding
her so she couldn't run.

"Y-you love me? That gives you motive to do it!" (name) struggled to get free. A dark chuckle came from
behind Arthur. Arthur and (name)'s eyes both widen as they turn to see a hooded figure at the front
door. Arthur turned pale at the site of the figure.

"N-no, i-it couldn't be!" Arthur let go of (name). "Love, run…"

"Who is that?!" (name) was frozen in place.

"You don't recognize me, love?" the figure had the same accent as Arthur!

"Shut up you bloody fake!" Arthur snapped at the figure.

"How can you call me a fake without calling yourself that?" the man took off his hood. Time nearly
stopped. There were two Arthurs in the room.

"I-impossible! How can there be two of you?!"  (name) was looking from one to the other.

"(name), I guess you could say…he's, how do I put this?" the Arthur (name) had been with was starting
but couldn't find the words.

"He's the so called 'good' half and I'm his 'bad' half, as he put it to me. You see, he found your fiancé
cheating and started having thoughts of killing the man, but he couldn't tell you love," the arthur by the
door smirked.

"Cheating?! There is no way!"

"But it is true, this weak pathetic excuse for a man didn't have the heart to tell you in fear you would
hate him and lose you. His hatred for your fiancé grown until he couldn't take it, so he used a spell to
make the hatred leave. That's where I came in. You see, I AM his hatred for that man. The Arthur you
stand by couldn't kill me, so I escaped," he Arthur by the door started walking towards (name) and
Arthur.

"So you killed him," was all (name) could choke out before tears started to fall.

"I-I'm sorry, I tried to find him, but I didn't know where you lived, but" the 'good' Arthur lunged at the
'bad' one a pinned him to a wall. "I'll be sure and stop him now!" the 'good' Arthur pulled out a pistol
and pointed it at the 'bad' Arthur's head.

"You can't kill me without killing yourself!" the 'bad' Arthur yelled.

"I know," he shot the 'bad' Arthur, but the 'bad' Arthur's body just disappeared.

"Arthur…" he turned to see (name) crying.

"I'm sorry, love," he pointed the gun to his own head. "I thought I was protecting you, but I was wrong,"
with tears in his own eyes, Arthur shot himself.  (name) screamed and fell to her knees sobbing
uncontrollably. Soon, a car was heard parking outside. (name) rushed out only to find Ian, Arthur's
eldest brother there.

"Aye lass, what's wrong," Ian said as he got out of the car. Even if (name) has never met him in person,
she knew he was kin to Arthur by those eyebrows and the sexy green eyes. (name) through herself at
him, luckily he caught the sobbing girl. "Lass?" (name) just pointed at the house. Ian nodded and sat her
in his car. "I'll be right back." With that he walked into the house. Ten minutes later he returned, pale,
and a bit shaken up. (name) has calmed down enough to explain what happened. Ian found it hard to
believe at first, but after thinking about his 'weird' brother, he figured it was possible.

"What do ye' need lass?"

"T-to bury them a-and a place to stay," (name) stumbled over her words. Ian nodded then went off to
bury the poor men. (name) placed flowers on their graves.

"Arthur, I'm not mad at what you did to (fiancé name), but I am pissed at you taking your own life,"
(name) kissed Arthur's grave marker then left with Ian. Ian took her to Arthur's house first. (name)'s
eyes widen as she saw a little boy, who looked almost just like Arthur, ran out to greet Ian.

"Hey ya' Ian!" Peter yelled running to the redhead. "Where is the mean ol' jerk?" (name) was close to
tears. She didn't bother to move or get out of the car.

"Well, he's gone away for a while, ye' goin ta' be livin' with me and tha' lass ov'r there," Ian nodded
towards (name).

"She's pretty!" Peter yelled as he and Ian went back to the car.

Months after everything, Peter had almost nearly healed (name)'s heart. She adopted him as her little
brother. Ian couldn't help but feel he did the right thing, but he is hiding something: he's falling for
(name) just as his brother did. Ian decided it was best to leave it alone. If she wanted to date, she would
let him know. Gilbert and Mathis found it odd that their drinking buddy suddenly showed up less and
hardly talked to them.

"Hey (name)!" Peter ran up to the girl. She was in the kitchen cooking. After all, who wants Scottish
food? Some of it can go head to head with English food and scary the poor boy.  

"Hm, yes Peter?" she hummed.

"When are you going to marry Ian?!" (name) could hear Ian choking on his drink in the living room.

"Uh, what?" (name) looked down at the small boy.

"Ian said that I can't marry you because he's going to!" Peter pouted.

'No wonder Arthur did his best not to strangle the brat,' Ian thought as he entered the kitchen. "He's got
one hell of an imagination, hehe."

"But you sa-"Ian cut Peter off, "bath, NOW!" Peter stomped his foot and walked away. Ian sighed.

"Lass, I was goin' ta' wait a while to tell ye', ye' know, after what all ye' been through," Ian rubbed the
back of his head looking down at the floor. (name) smiled and kissed his cheek.

"Thanks Ian," she went back to cooking. Ian looked shocked but went off the bathe Peter. (name) could
only hope he didn't kill the poor kid. (name) suddenly felt like someone was hugging her. She turned but
no one was there. 'Strange,' she thought. Little did she know that she had an angel watching her.

~~~ (two years later) ~~~

(name) ended up marring Ian, without Peter's approval. After a few months Peter became over excited
and ran up to Ian.

"What?" Ian looked from his newspaper to the boy.

"(name) said I'm going to be an uncle! " Peter yelled flailing his arms around running in circles.  

"Eh?" Ian looked at him weird, until it hit him. "(name)!"

"Yes?" she walked to him looking ever so innocent.

"A-are ye'? Really?" Ian's skin was slightly pale. (name) nodded and Ian passed out.

"Is he ok?" Peter poked Ian's face. (name) giggled.

"He will be."
well, here is the end! it was kinda crappy v_v' I'm so sorry for that! hope you liked the rest of it!
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:iconweredfluttershy:
weredfluttershy Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
I am trying very hard here not to cry in a public place.(5 seconds later)Waaaah! 
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Writer
Aww
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mewpham278 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
god dammit, iggy! I only I had known aikido and just arm-locked him and take the gun out of his hands... gaaah :'(Cry emote waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai?!
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5British1Kitty5 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
I liked this but i'm crying that iggy killed himself
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Writer
sad isnt it? all to save you
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:icon5british1kitty5:
5British1Kitty5 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
nyaa I feel loved and guilty ):
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Student Writer
ja~
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:iconsarpndo:
sarpndo Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
:)
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:icontotal-anime-fangirl:
Total-Anime-Fangirl Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
that pic :iconpervplz:
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Writer
lol yea, i do love it too
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SketchyRabbit Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
hahaha! Agreed.
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:iconkittychic4444:
kittychic4444 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Filmographer
im scottish and i acually talk like ian and have a friend called arthur! lol

p.s. i love hetalia and num num, britian
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Writer
I'm very happy i got his accent right! I was afraid i would mess it up! and wow, a friend named Arthur >.> how... interesting
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:iconkittychic4444:
kittychic4444 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Student Filmographer
i know lol
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Student Writer
awesome!
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:iconkittychic4444:
kittychic4444 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Student Filmographer
:3 yeah
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:iconbritish-hero:
British-Hero Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
*sniffs* I wanted Arthur >:

But still interesting twist into the story~
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Writer
aww~ i'm sorry, but you got to admit-Arthur was a brave one, plus hes watching over you~
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:iconbritish-hero:
British-Hero Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Ah i know...
*nods and sniffs*
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Writer
poor Arthur...maybe he'll get his loving story too~
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:iconbritish-hero:
British-Hero Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I hope he does~ he deserves it after this XD
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Writer
yup lol
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:iconpurpleflowerribbons:
PurpleFlowerRibbons Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE SCOTLAND.

This. Rocked.
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Writer
aww Thank you! I'm very happy you liked it!
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:iconpurpleflowerribbons:
PurpleFlowerRibbons Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, it was my pleasure!
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:iconpurpleflowerribbons:
PurpleFlowerRibbons Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
and a fantastic story might I add!
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:iconmeggie722:
meggie722 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
really good
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
thank you
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xXxRinkakuxXx Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I was rite!!! Yosh!!! *throws confetti* this is gonna sound really fickle but YES I GOT IAN!!!! But dnt worry I still love you Arthur~<3 Well done!! :D
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kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
lol awesome job! glad your happy with Ian, and yes we still love Arthur
Arthur- Ha! take that Ian!
Ian- i married her, you fail
Arthur-....
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:iconxxxrinkakuxxx:
xXxRinkakuxXx Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No b upset darlin...*pats Arthur's head*
And Ian stop teasing your brother!!
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
Arthur- *smirk*
Ian- aye' hes the lil'est
um, thats Peter dummy...
Ian- right...Arthur is still the big baby of the family
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xXxRinkakuxXx Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD how could you forget cute Peter,Ian?!
I'm surprise there was no witty comeback Arthur XD
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
Arthur- having you yell at him is enough *kisses your hand softly*
Ian- *raises a thick eyebrow*
*giggles*
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:iconxxxrinkakuxxx:
xXxRinkakuxXx Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
>\\\\> t-thats good...
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Writer
Arthur- *chuckles*
Ian- *kisses other hand*
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
^^ I fee really smart. I knew it~ I told myfriend Day that I figured it out, wait till I tell her I was right. The intor pic and the way reader self was placing this together, it was good and evil^^ yay~ *gives self a cookie*
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
*noms on cookie with bright sparkly eyes* yummy, thank you! Yes, the pic was a dead give-a-way
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
^^
I think it you chose a different pick people would just think it was Arthur and then they would have been half right ^^ still it was a really good story, even the ending where I marry Ian, who I don't actually like but eh~
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
so, you dont like Ian or Alfred? hm...
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
lol^^ nope. The only guys I like are Arthur, Gilbert, Feliciano, Ivan, Romania, and Egypt (brain fart on how to sleep Egypt's name =_= at moment)
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
lol Gily and Feli got their love stories! oh, i should do Ivan next..hm..
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:iconsilvia-x-gaara:
Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
^^ lol~ sounds like it would be fun
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
yes, i think i could do a good ivan, due to when my (use to be) friends and i found Hetalia they claimed me as Russia, i was like 'Thanks -_-' im all big and scary" then thought about it "yea, i can come off nice but be creepy as hell too" but now I am Canada, due to completely being ignored by them...
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
spell ><
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Bynsair Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student General Artist
NO, ARTHUR, NO!!!

...oh well, the reader gets Ian in the end! :3
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
but i bet Arthur pulls pranks on Ian since hes an angel now lol
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:iconbynsair:
Bynsair Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student General Artist
YES!! And I will help him form time to time. >: D Because it's always fun to tease Ian.
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:iconkayniakaya:
kayniakaya Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
Agreed! teasing Ian would be so much fun!
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